Score: 10

"Bleh at my voice acting...well done though."

submission: TBBAM Episode 1 - Part 1

date: August 13, 2008

Next time I would appreciate if I could watch the scenes so I could know how to speak in more natural and rhythmical way.

The beginning was like you said, a display of how you used to animate when you first got flash. Progressively your animating skills became way better. Although you say you wanted to keep the beginning scenes as they were made for the most part as a timeline, still think you just wanted to finish.

My biggest quarrel was the sniper scene...it was a kind of lacking in few ways....the block he was aiming at was not three dimensional like a block would be, and also the way he is shot in the head then gets up and says "fine I'll stop messing with Mike" was not a good line. It's not something that would be said because 1) how would he know getting shot was MIke's doing 2) If you survived getting sniped in the head, I don't think you would say that even if you were sure of who panned your killing.

The humor was good and I would be willing to voice acting for you again, I'm just pissed off at how amateurish I came off as.

Score: 6

"Too slow paced and unenjoyable."

submission: Hoops Mania

date: June 5, 2007

The game has nice graphics, but the gameplay is dull and has no replay-value. There is nothing added that makes the game interesting enough to play, and it would be a much better game if everything moved a bit faster, since there isn't too much time.

Overall, nice graphics, however, not interesting or fun.

Score: 4

"Add more detail in your animation."

submission: Bird on farm

date: February 24, 2007

This flash would look so much better if you added more detail. In other words, your drawings were too simplistic. Another thing is, there wasn't any point to it, nor anything to catch the viewers attention. For example, adding more colors to the sky. Honestly, it came off as you didn't put enough effort into the drawings and the movement of the bird was mediocre.

I think you should definitely continue flash because you have potential, but you should work on the way things move and perhaps add more colors and mesh them.

Score: 8

"Pretty catchy"

submission: Insanity Begins Here

date: April 5, 2008

The music flowed well, with a nice bass.

It's very good, the only problem which seems blatant is the way the music seems to be going through a vacuum.

I'm still giving a 5/5 though so w.e.

Score: 10

"Very beautiful."

submission: Savn

date: October 19, 2007

If things happened like you think, then RIP.

Score: 10

"Do like."

submission: A Collection of Guilt

date: September 29, 2007

I don't care as much for Black Metal as the other sub-genres in metal, but that was great.

I love how some people involved with metal just look like nice and average people,
but they sing like demons.